Mordred's Tale — State

Narrative fronts, manuscript position, and next writing queue for Mordred's Tale.

Mordred's Tale — State

Registry

FieldValue
bookmordreds_tale
sourcebooks/mordreds_tale/
statusin-progress
updated2026-03-18
draft-goalComplete full first draft chapter-by-chapter; page-level polish (line edits, continuity, prose) deferred.
outlineMordred's Tale — Outline for arc and beats.

Cast (working names)

RoleName
Jack’s subordinate; Enid’s fatherOwain
Mordred’s half-sister (Morgana + Owain)Enid
Enid’s daughter (~15, Act III); Jack’s childGwyneth

Narrative Fronts

ThreadLocationLast PageSummary
Morgana (present)Ch3 — through 013-page-84-the-house-of-small-mercies.md013-page-84-the-house-of-small-mercies.mdFirst-draft Ch3 complete: council pressure, separation test, night arrest, Jack arrives as patron, Owain on the chain of command, Mordred to the House of Small Mercies with clay amulet (Midas setup). Morgana captive; Act II opens orphanage.
Jack (past)Ch2 — Lair, Morgana's chamber039-page-71-magic-found.mdFound sleeping Morgana; she charges relics. His story leads to empire built on this secret. Later: go deeper for Merlin at core (magic returns).

Manuscript Position

FieldValue
prologuecomplete (pages 1–11)
ch1-morganacomplete (pages 12–31)
ch2-jackcomplete through page 71 (Magic Found)
ch3-morgana-imprisonedfirst draft complete — pages 72–84 (13 files in chapter folder)

Next Queue

PriorityActionType
1run Chapter Done Checklist on Ch3 + one chapter-level rework pass (no page micro-polish yet)writing
2add Chapter 4 to book.json / chapter map and begin Act II orphanage opener (full chapter draft)writing
3lock Chapter 4+ chapter map for Act II and continue chapter-at-a-time draftingplan then writing
4lock Act III chapter map and finish manuscript chapter-at-a-timeplan then writing
5page-by-page refinement pass after full draft is completedeferred

Chapter Workflow

StepRule
draftDraft the entire chapter before judging prose quality.
reworkRework at chapter scope once (logic, pacing, transitions, motive, continuity).
gateMark chapter done only when checklist passes.
micro-polishDefer line-level/page-level polish until full manuscript draft is complete.

References

IdPathPurpose
book-jsonbooks/mordreds_tale/book.jsontitle, author, description
ch1books/mordreds_tale/chapters/01-chapter-1-morgana/Morgana escape, baby, toward council
ch2books/mordreds_tale/chapters/02-chapter-2-jack/Jack sent to lair, pendant, discovery of sleeping woman, magic found
ch3books/mordreds_tale/chapters/03-chapter-3-morgana-imprisoned/settlement, council, eastern quarters

Style Rule

FieldValue
toneSanderson-adjacent: clear cause-effect, character-driven choices
balanceNewer pages: more dialogue and interiority; enough scenic detail to orient; avoid long blocks of pure atmosphere